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Crafting Your Story Concept

11/20/2024

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Your concept must stand out as distinctive, engaging, & creative. Create a captivating hook. For me, I look at the main conflict/tension it generates, & whether your story provided an emotional journey for not only the characters but for the audience.

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Writing for Emotions

9/21/2023

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 Receiving a RECOMMEND requires connecting with your audience i.e., your reader, your producer.
So, how do you make an emotional connection? 
  1. Create Relatable and Remarkable Characters: Develop dimensional, relatable characters with flaws, strengths, and relatable motivations. Make the audience care about what happens to them. Give them relatable qualities and experiences that resonate with your target audience. This means giving them moral choices to make and defining moments. 
  2. Establish Clear, Worthy Goals and Motivations: Clearly define what your characters want and why they want it. The audience should understand and empathize with their desires and motivations. When the audience can relate to a character's goals, it becomes emotionally invested in their journey. The goal should be worhty and meaningful to the character as well as to the audience. There should also be stakes.  
  3. Build Conflict and Tension: Conflict and Tension are at the heart of all storytelling. Introduce obstacles, challenges, complications, and antagonists that create tension and drive the plot forward. When characters face adversity, the audience roots for them to overcome it, forging an emotional connection.
  4. Show Vulnerability: Allow your characters to be vulnerable. Show their fears, insecurities, and doubts. When characters reveal their inner struggles, it humanizes them and makes the audience more emotionally invested in their well-being. The audience doesn't want perfect characters. 
  5. Meaningful Dialogue: Meaningful dialogue can convey emotions effectively. Use subtext, body language, and well-crafted dialogue to reveal characters' feelings and intentions. Avoid on-the-nose dialogue that explicitly states emotions; instead, let the audience infer them.
  6. Show, Don't Tell: Instead of telling the audience how a character feels, show it through actions, expressions, and situations. For example, if a character is grieving, show their sadness through their actions and interactions rather than telling the audience they are sad.
  7. Create Empathy Through Backstories: Develop compelling backstories for your characters that explain their behavior and motivations. When the audience understands what led a character to their current situation, they are more likely to empathize with them. What is your character's backstory? What triggers them? 
  8. Use Symbolism, Metaphors, and Visual Storytelling: Employ symbolism and metaphors to convey deeper emotions and themes. Visual and thematic motifs can resonate on a subconscious level and add depth to the emotional experience.
  9. Craft Memorable Defining Moments: Include powerful, emotionally charged scenes or moments that resonate with the audience. These can be turning points, revelations, or moments of catharsis that leave a lasting impact. These are the defining moments for your characters.
  10. Script Emotions: Share your screenplay and get feedback. Pay attention to how they react emotionally to the story. Their responses can help you gauge whether your screenplay is effectively connecting with its audience.
When I finish reading a script, I always ask if the story and the characters have provided an emotional journey. 
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What is Screenplay Coverage?

8/5/2023

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Screenplay coverage is a process in the entertainment industry, specifically in the film and television sectors, where a script is analyzed and evaluated by a professional reader or script analyst. The goal of screenplay coverage is to provide feedback and insights to the script's author, production companies, studios, or agents to help them make informed decisions about the script's potential for development and production.
The coverage typically includes the following elements:
  1. Logline: A brief summary of the script's premise in one or two sentences.
  2. Synopsis: A more detailed summary of the entire script, including major plot points and character arcs.
  3. Comments on the Strengths: A discussion of what works well in the script, such as engaging characters, a compelling storyline, or unique and original ideas.
  4. Comments on the Weaknesses: Constructive feedback on areas that need improvement, such as plot holes, underdeveloped characters, inconsistent tone, or pacing issues.
  5. Marketability and Audience: An assessment of the script's commercial potential and target audience.
  6. Recommendation: A final recommendation on whether the script is considered "pass," "consider" (with some revisions), or "recommend" (ready for production).
Coverage is an essential step in the development process of a screenplay, as it helps writers and industry professionals identify the script's strengths and weaknesses, make necessary improvements, and decide whether to pursue further development or production. It is important to note that different companies or individuals may have their own specific formats and criteria for screenplay coverage.
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How to Create A Logline

8/5/2023

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Creating a compelling screenplay logline is essential for grabbing the attention of potential readers, producers, or agents. A logline is a brief, one to two-sentence summary of your screenplay's central concept, focusing on the main character, their goal, the conflict, and the stakes. Here's a step-by-step guide to creating a screenplay logline:
  1. Identify the main character: Start by introducing the protagonist. Who is the story about? What are their defining traits or characteristics that make them interesting?
  2. Describe the character's goal: What does the protagonist want to achieve or accomplish throughout the story? This goal should be specific and significant.
  3. Introduce the conflict: What stands in the way of the main character achieving their goal? This could be an antagonist, a personal obstacle, or a challenging situation.
  4. Highlight the stakes: What are the consequences of success or failure for the main character? The higher the stakes, the more engaging the logline.
  5. Keep it concise and clear: Loglines should generally be one to two sentences, so every word counts. Avoid unnecessary details and focus on the core elements of the story.
  6. Show the uniqueness: What makes your screenplay stand out from others? Highlight any original or intriguing aspects that set it apart.
  7. Consider the genre and tone: Depending on your screenplay's genre (e.g., drama, comedy, thriller, sci-fi), make sure the logline reflects the appropriate tone and style.
  8. Write and revise: Start with a draft logline and then keep refining it until you have a concise and attention-grabbing summary.
Here's an example of a logline for the movie "Jurassic Park":
"When a group of scientists is invited to an island theme park filled with cloned dinosaurs, they must fight to survive when the prehistoric creatures break free and wreak havoc."
Keep in mind that loglines are meant to provide a snapshot of your screenplay's concept, so it's natural to go through several iterations to find the most effective one. It's also helpful to get feedback from others to ensure your logline is clear and enticing.
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Terri Zinner, A Film Writer Special  Screenplay Coverage Rates

12/24/2020

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Special Screenplay Coverage Rates Offered. 
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Films Wanted

1/30/2018

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From Gregory Anderson: We are seeking filmmakers and Directors, Producers with completed feature films that have commercial viability in the market. We encourage women directors and producers with completed productions to submit. Please only submit if you have the legal right to do so meaning you have all rights to Film being submitted. Please include link to trailer of the film you are submitting for consideration. 
It’s time for new voices to rise up
For information and to submit:[email protected]
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January 24th, 2016

1/24/2016

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Congrats to screenwriter Erik Wolter for winning our Winter Themed Holiday Screenplay Contest for his screenplay Jennifer's Gift! 
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Winner of October Horror Themed Screenplay

11/20/2015

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Congrats to writer Peter Edward  for winning our October 2015 Horror Theme Contest! 
Make sure to submit your  Holiday Winter Themed Screenplay at a special rate and be entered into our Winter Holiday Themed Contest.  

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HOLLYWOOD LITERARY COMPANIES 

8/8/2015

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http://screenplayscripts.com/literary-management-hollywood/
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Terri Zinner Interview For Maximum Z

5/20/2015

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https://maximumz.wordpress.com/2015/05/19/ask-a-truly-superlative-script-consultant/
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